A poem written for your criticisms?

Question

Cassady and Kerouac, blazing down the West American coast,
roaring down the Valley,
before plunging down into San Francisco,
sauntering past the gates of Chinatown
blaring jazz and blues.
And Allen Ginsberg, giddy and sentimental,
whispering in the ear of a lion statue
about the mechanics of poetry,
ghosts of a memory, a vision in the mists.

Answer 1

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Very beat nicky dance cat
House of fog and glass
Coffee stained napkin poem
Snapping necks like fingers
Throwing berets at the stage
A haircut away from the hippies

Asker's Rating:

Asker's Comment:

Indeed.

Answer 2

i dig the subject matter--and I think it's good!

Answer 3

i think its too specific.. honestly if you become too specific in poems it becomes limited and can't be fully interpreted by most people..

Answer 4

I love San Francisco. I live here and there is a magic to this place. Live and let live is the mantra. Where artists can be artists.

Answer 5

Punched in the face by modern fists.