A poem I wrote about waterfalls........?

I love waterfalls. I also love writing... this poem is the culmination of those two things. It doesn't really follow any rythmic pattern, nor is it anything special really. but its true to my feelings. so anyway, what do you think? like it? hate it? please let me know ~ Completely at Ease ~ Wait here,... show more I love waterfalls. I also love writing... this poem is the culmination of those two things. It doesn't really follow any rythmic pattern, nor is it anything special really. but its true to my feelings.

so anyway, what do you think? like it? hate it? please let me know

~ Completely at Ease ~

Wait here, take in it all.
This gently flowing down,
Crystal clear blue waterfall.

Now slowly close your eyes
As misty air finds your face,
And all your troubles rush away.

Much rapid water crashing down
Such captivating peaceful sound
Softly playing for your ears.


Warmth travels in the breeze,
as sunlight flickers through tall trees.
You slowly crack a smile
‘Cause now your completely at ease.
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