Why no one buying my book? I self publish it and I have a friend edit it for me?

Update: A long time ago there was a boy, simply known as the Christmas Magician, for he loved Christmas with all his heart. The Christmas Magician wanted to learn and grow to better himself. One day he decided to take a class on how to fly on the backside of a dragon. The Christmas Magician's parents didn't want... show more A long time ago there was a boy, simply known as the Christmas Magician, for he loved Christmas with all his heart. The Christmas Magician wanted to learn and grow to better himself. One day he decided to take a class on how to fly on the backside of a dragon. The Christmas Magician's parents didn't want the boy to take the class. They feared he would hurts himself.
Update 2: part of the book
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