Help with a love poem?

I’m trying to write a poem for this guy I like who just so happens to be my roommate and my friends with benefits. I would love for him to be my boyfriend but I want to ask him out with something better than just out right asking “ Be my boyfriend?” I’m having trouble finding the words I want for one more line at... show more I’m trying to write a poem for this guy I like who just so happens to be my roommate and my friends with benefits. I would love for him to be my boyfriend but I want to ask him out with something better than just out right asking “ Be my boyfriend?” I’m having trouble finding the words I want for one more line at the bottom after “so will you be my boyfriend..”. Any suggestions? Also if you think I could fix any wording to make it sound better or anything that sticks out that maybe you think could be edited I love constructive criticism especially because I never write poetry.

I think about you
do you think about me,
more than just sexually?
I think about you,
And everything you do
and I start to fall uncontrollably
I know we have our differences
And a slight age gap too
But that doesn’t matter to me
Because all I see is you
No matter how you look
No matter your mood
I love you
Do you love me too?
If the answer is yes
And I hope that it is
I want to be yours
And for you to be mine
So will you be my boyfriend?
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