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Words asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 months ago

I always choose the best answer. How do I improve this poem to sound less awkward or is it already fine?

Oh thee,

Oh hello,

Are you soused or sober?

Are you asleep or is thee awake?

Oh thee,

Oh sorrow,

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  • 9 months ago
    Best answer

    Ah! thou!

    Ah! all hail!

    Art thou drunken or art thou sober?

    Art thou slumbering or art thou awake?

    O, thou!

    O, sorrow!

    • Bookbinder
      Lv 7
      9 months agoReport

      I'm pleased to help! Your questions suit my interest in poetic language.

  • Tina
    Lv 7
    9 months ago

    What exactly are you trying to say?

    At the moment it's not really a poem - and what does "Oh thee" mean? it's not something anyone would ever say.

  • 9 months ago

    For I Captain my Captain.

    Source(s): 99 red ballons
  • Anonymous
    9 months ago

    increase the angular speed of the 5 ampere wire

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