Words
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Words asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 year ago

I always choose the best answer. How do I improve this poem to sound less awkward or is it already fine?

Oh thee,

Oh hello,

Are you soused or sober?

Are you asleep or is thee awake?

Oh thee,

Oh sorrow,

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  • 1 year ago
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    Ah! thou!

    Ah! all hail!

    Art thou drunken or art thou sober?

    Art thou slumbering or art thou awake?

    O, thou!

    O, sorrow!

  • Tina
    Lv 7
    1 year ago

    What exactly are you trying to say?

    At the moment it's not really a poem - and what does "Oh thee" mean? it's not something anyone would ever say.

  • 1 year ago

    For I Captain my Captain.

    Source(s): 99 red ballons
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  • Anonymous
    1 year ago

    increase the angular speed of the 5 ampere wire

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