Honest review of my writing?

So I write a good bit, and I want to improve. I’m just too embarrassed to ask people for their opinions. I’ve never shown anyone my writing, cause I honestly feel like it’s trash. You can be mean if you want; I just want an honest assessment of my writing. Here’s one poem I’ve written: “The tempest has come... show more So I write a good bit, and I want to improve. I’m just too embarrassed to ask people for their opinions. I’ve never shown anyone my writing, cause I honestly feel like it’s trash. You can be mean if you want; I just want an honest assessment of my writing. Here’s one poem I’ve written: “The tempest has come through. The damage has been done. Here I stand; branches broken, leaves ripped away, and roots torn from the earth. I bear no fruit; I’m one gust away from collapse. But spring will come again. My cracks will harden, my roots will grow deeper than before, and I will sprout new life.”
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