I really like the content/idea behind it. However, the rhythm and sentence structure are a little faulty in places. The first couple lines are in iambic hexameter (that means that the rhythm goes "duh DUH duh DUH duh DUH duh DUH duh DUH duh DUH", or 6 repetitions of a soft-hard combination), but it breaks down in the third line. The third line goes "duh DUH duh duh DUH duh DUH duh duh DUH duh DUH duh DUH" - in other words, you have two soft syllables in a row (at "(maz)es I" and at "from and". You could try something like "A maze I can't escape from; running without end" to preserve the rhythm. The following lines have similar problems. The second to last line is interesting because it has consistent rhythm, but it's trochaic instead of iambic (this means it starts on a hard syllable instead of a soft syllable). To fix it, you could simply leave out the "It's" and the rhythm would be the same as the first two lines.