What do you think this poem means and what are your thoughts?

She whispers in my ear sweet nothings

With massive weight my heart she is crushing

The feelings of bliss and dismiss in her words

What felt warm and loving is now deferred

She has my heart but I can not reach hers

Comprehensive feelings are now a blur

Her heart encased in ice chains as to my wild flames

Neither her nor I to blame, it’s all just “part of the game “

They say the devil was once an angel

Good or evil she is the one to whom I’m faithful

Unintentional love with our hearts beating in sync

With the words “ I love you” our hearts link

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  • Anonymous
    8 months ago

    It means that the author is trying to write in meter and rhyme, and is failing miserably on both counts.

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  • Great ! You perfectly described the feelings somebody in a relationship might have .

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  • Anonymous
    8 months ago

    No place for cowards.

    And which one would that be?

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  • 8 months ago

    I like it, but I would hate to live it.

    Which means you made it real.

    well done

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  • 8 months ago

    Evocative, every line of it. Brava!

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