Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceWords & Wordplay · 8 months ago

Can someone reword this into 2 sentences?

"My favorite color is blue. For me, I always feel calmest surrounded by beautiful blues, whether it be the ocean or the sky. Blue is always so energizing and beautiful to me."

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  • 8 months ago

    My favorite color is blue because that color is always so energizing and beautiful to me. Whether it be the ocean or the sky, I always feel calmest surrounded by beautiful blues,

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  • 8 months ago

    My favorite color is beautiful blue. I always feel calm yet energized when surrounded by blue, whether it be the ocean or sky.

    Or

    Surround me with ocean or sky, and I feel calm yet energized.

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  • 8 months ago

    There's nothing wrong with it. I would delete 'For me'; it's not wrong, but it's unnecessary.

    But if you HAVE to re-phrase it as two sentences:

    My favourite colour is blue, always beautiful and energising. I always feel calmest when surrounded by the blue of the sea or the sky.

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  • 8 months ago

    My favorite color, blue, is so energizing and beautiful. I feel the most calm when surrounded by the shades of blue ocean or sky. (It actually sounds a bit contradictory to say its energizing in one sentence then calming in the next. Perhaps use the word “uplifting” instead of energizing or “at peace” instead of calm?!)

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  • 8 months ago

    "My favorite color is blue because I find it energizing and beautiful. I always feel calmest surrounded by shades of blue, whether it be the ocean or the sky."

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  • 8 months ago

    In general, most people's favorite color is Blue also

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  • 8 months ago

    It's fine the way it is. Why do you need to reword it? BTW, the suggestion by Anonymous is a comma splice, and grammatically incorrect. Don't use it.

    "My favorite color is blue because I always feel calmest...." Leave the rest alone.

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  • Satan
    Lv 7
    8 months ago

    "I like the color blue"

    "My penis bends like a banana"

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