How to make this simple comparative sentence right?
There are 4 ways to express as below. I like the first one, but is it grammatically sound?
The average salary of the male group is $20,000, significantly lower than $30,000 of the female group.
The average salary of the male group is $20,000, significantly lower than $30,000 for the female group.
The average salary of the male group is $20,000, significantly lower than the female group of $30,000.
The average salary of the male group is ($20,000) significantly lower than the female group ($30,000).
3 Answers
- bluebellbkkLv 71 year agoFavourite answer
The average salary of the male group is $20,000, significantly lower than THE $30,000 average salary of the female group.
- Ranchmom1Lv 71 year ago
The average salary of the male group, $20,000, is significantly lower than the $30,000 average salary of the female group.
You might add how often they are earning that money i.e. $20,000/year or $20,000/month?
- CarolineLv 71 year ago
No, none of it is correct and I have to wonder if it's even true, but in the interest of editorial accuracy, I'll play along.
The average salary of the male group is $20,000, significantly less than the $30,000 average salary of the female group.