How to make this simple comparative sentence right?

There are 4 ways to express as below. I like the first one, but is it grammatically sound?

The average salary of the male group is $20,000, significantly lower than $30,000 of the female group.

The average salary of the male group is $20,000, significantly lower than $30,000 for the female group.

The average salary of the male group is $20,000, significantly lower than the female group of $30,000.

The average salary of the male group is ($20,000) significantly lower than the female group ($30,000).

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  • 1 year ago
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    The average salary of the male group is $20,000, significantly lower than THE $30,000 average salary of the female group.

  • 1 year ago

    The average salary of the male group, $20,000, is significantly lower than the $30,000 average salary of the female group.

    You might add how often they are earning that money i.e. $20,000/year or $20,000/month?

  • 1 year ago

    No, none of it is correct and I have to wonder if it's even true, but in the interest of editorial accuracy, I'll play along. 

    The average salary of the male group is $20,000, significantly less than the $30,000 average salary of the female group. 

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