What do you think of this poem called "Blind Eyes?"?
Rode the tide until it took me
It washed my body whole
The eyes couldn't see
I had everywhere to go
The waves told me to be
Free as a skeleton, so
The blood of the sea
Only death, I know
- Anonymous2 months agoFavorite Answer
It's written by a teenager who's never read any poetry.
- PearlLv 72 months ago
i think its a good poem
- MaryLv 72 months ago
Lacks structure, form, meter, and anything other than the basic rudiments of a rhyme scheme.
It’s words written down by someone who doesn’t understand what separates a poem from words thrown on a page.
- Man AbrierLv 52 months ago
Sounds like something written by an angsty goth girl in high school who listens to My Chemical Romance