Could check my grammar mistakes, please? Short paragraph?

Please, check my grammar mistakes, thanks:

“Once the first containers arrived in Italy, the ABC Company inspected the following observations:

- The boxes show deformation during the assembly.

- The boxes do not meet the tolerances in dimensions according to the following table included in Annex 123 “Inspection Report of ABC Company”.”

1 Answer

  • 8 months ago

    You don't really mean that they inspected the observations. They made the observations, or the inspection showed the following:

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