Could anyone please help my English sentence please ?

Thank you in advance. 

Is the sentence (grammar) in the below correct?

“My life has been complicated. 

I love and trust my parents and sister, but I can’t live with them. 

I don’t love the husband and I don’t trust him but I CAN live with him. 

I was no place to go, I felt so alone and feeling low and cold when I was at parents’ home, but the husband gave me a place when I met him. 

Even though he didn’t treat me right, I felt being with him was so much BETTER than come back to my home. ”

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  • 10 months ago

    Sentences are a bit wordy. Here’s a revision: 

    “My life has been complicated. I love and trust my parents, but I can’t live with them. I don’t love or trust the husband, but I can live with him. I had no place to go. I  felt so alone, low, and cold, but the husband gave me shelter. Even though he didn’t treat me well, I felt much better living with him than I did living at home” 

  • 10 months ago

    I don't love MY husband

    I HAD no place to go

    and WAS feeling low

    at my (or our) parents' home

    than coming back

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