Could anyone please help my English sentence please ?
Thank you in advance.
Is the sentence (grammar) in the below correct?
“My life has been complicated.
I love and trust my parents and sister, but I can’t live with them.
I don’t love the husband and I don’t trust him but I CAN live with him.
I was no place to go, I felt so alone and feeling low and cold when I was at parents’ home, but the husband gave me a place when I met him.
Even though he didn’t treat me right, I felt being with him was so much BETTER than come back to my home. ”
- 10 months ago
Sentences are a bit wordy. Here’s a revision:
“My life has been complicated. I love and trust my parents, but I can’t live with them. I don’t love or trust the husband, but I can live with him. I had no place to go. I felt so alone, low, and cold, but the husband gave me shelter. Even though he didn’t treat me well, I felt much better living with him than I did living at home”
- yet-knish!Lv 710 months ago
I don't love MY husband
I HAD no place to go
and WAS feeling low
at my (or our) parents' home
than coming back