melody asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 month ago

Does my poem have potential?

I love you,

I love you

I love you, it’s true

Shield me from harm,

& murder my truth

I love you

I love you

So cut out my eyes

Bask me in charm,

with your sweet little lies

I love you, I love you

So Rip out my tongue

Tell me that you love me,

And make me belong

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  • Anonymous
    1 month ago
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    As much as Pinocchio does as a motivational speaker.

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  • Lôn
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    Potential to be binned!!!.... you are, never have been and never will be a poet Mildred... please stop posting this rubbish over and over and over and over.

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