Does my poem have potential?
Can’t break out of my cloak of. Lies,
Can’t breathe, only choke, Green skies
In the water, to drown, seems a lullaby
Can’t seem to see anything anymore, Only green skies
- 8 months agoFavourite answer
I think you can post on Instagram and see if you have readers that like it.
It can be good, and you can include some description of what you are talking about in your posts
- LônLv 78 months ago
Potential to be binned!!!.... you are, never have been and never will be a poet Mildred... please stop posting this rubbish over and over and over and over.
- choko_canyonLv 78 months ago
Potential for what? One note: Get rid of the period after "of", and end that line with "lies".