melody asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 month ago

Is my poem good?

Rose

I did not welcome you that night,

There was no room for you that night 

That cold cruel winters night 

There was no room for you that night 

You preserved and came back again 

Paranoid, I let you in 

You enchanted me non- the less 

I could not forget how pale and thin 

I protected you night she day 

Your blossom bloomed in every way

You mesmerised Everyone you knew 

I could not forget the change in you.

Now that fate swept me away 

My beautiful rose withers every day 

I sit here, lost, broken, torn

I see No beauty - Just the Thorns

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  • Lôn
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    NO Mildred!!..stop inflicting these terrible 'poems' on us day after day after day.. Find another hobby for suck's fake!

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  • 1 month ago

    persevered, not preserved. It's a terrible poem, kind of like a fish in the wrong basket.

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