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On the other hand, it shows almost a dozen different cases of Hispanic people who are suffered enormously being an undocumented. I could not believe how this crew was able to film every detailed scenes.

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  • blank
    Lv 6
    2 months ago
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    Make just three small changes.

    Change ...people who are suffered.... to ....people who are suffering......

    Drop "an" between being and undocumented.

    Drop "every" between film and detailed.   

    Now reads thusly:

    "On the other hand, it shows almost a dozen different cases of Hispanic people who are suffering enormously being undocumented. I could not believe how this crew was able to film detailed scenes."

    Hope this helps.

  • RP
    Lv 7
    2 months ago

    Change "are" to "have" and "every" to "many."

  • 2 months ago

    who have suffered--- present perfect

    undocumented- this is an adjective, don't use "an" in front of it.

    every detailed scene.  "every" is used before singular nouns. 

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