Are these sentences correct correct? It's a response to someone's message.?

Bro, I am surviving in the pandemic like many others, and I hope so are you. Thank you so much for always being concerned about my well-being! I feel blessed to have a well-wisher like you. You are right! It has been a while since we got in touch the last time. I assume you couldn’t make time for your friends considering your super busy life. You are worth appreciating for carrying so many responsibilities at such a young age. It takes immense strength to be a student, spouse and a father simultaneously. I wish you lots of happiness and success! 

Does the word " simultaneously."  sound natural in  the second last sentence?

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  • 1 month ago
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    Doesn't sound natural. Try: 'all at the same time'. 

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