Comma question?

Question

He hurried toward the gate of the pen, through the flock of sheep.

Is the comma essential, optional or forbidden? Thanks!

Answer 1

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As written, the comma is necessary, but I agree that the elements of this sentence are not in the best order. I'd go with "He hurried through the flock of sheep toward the gate of the pen."

Answer 2

is there a pen through the flock of sheep, a pen that happens to have a gate?

If not, it is essential

Answer 3

Optional, though I think it is slightly better with the comma than without.

Answer 4

It would be better written as:

He hurried through the flock of sheep toward the gate of the pen.

Answer 5

In that sentence it's optional.

Answer 6

Essential.