in writing a story can i use this in a story ?
she felt herself getting was getting wet between her legs
and her panties are wet
- bluebellbkkLv 72 months ago
You are the person who was asking if they can use the word "brothel" in a story.
I think it's time you grew up. It's CERTAINLY time you learned to write better English.
- CogitoLv 72 months ago
The content isn't the problem. Your English is very poor and this is really silly stuff.
- MsBittnerLv 72 months ago
michael, I write erotic fiction for money. It's apparent you have never read any graphic sex scenes, or you'd know this just won't do.
It filters. It repeats words without a positive cumulative effect. It uses vague terms where it should be specific. It fails to observe the many rules of written English.
If your story is not for school (where nothing sexual is appropriate, according to many teachers), then you can use this--but any editor will hold it against you because it's so poorly done.
- Anonymous2 months ago
If that is the best you can do, writing is not for you.
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- VoelvenLv 72 months ago
"she felt herself getting was getting wet between her legs" needs editing.
Otherwise yes, you can use it in a story, although obviously not for children and probably not in Christian Literature either (unless it's written in a non-sexual context).