Comment on my poem?
Maniacal laughter with his face
In the shotgun shells
Always within close reach
Sit up and check her text
10 bucks if you speak
Across the street
They pull up to see
To see the lights go out
Pupils die late and adjust
Pump action cross both shoulders
We strecth in with the beat
As the wind begins to howl
- Anonymous3 days ago
chosen people = the ones that have the correct religion. orthodoxy is the only true faith with one cup and one spoon and no one gets sick. roman catholics tried one cup one spoon ritual and got sick with bubonic plague; if heresy enters orthodox monastery, then its inhabitants will get sick also. covid = another heresy; that's why disposable cups were introduced in heretical gatherings. churches who had disposable cups, masks, disposable spoons, dipped spoon into alcohol, or closed for covid = no grace of the Holy Spirit in them = they woik for satin. death to de antichrist! oh...snap... here he iz flyin' thru ma neck of de woodz; hide ur kidz, hide ur wife; antichrist is flyin' thru town; take ur glocks out and shoot dat son of a bytch down; he's an s-o-b 'cuz his mother is a 12th generation prostitute to jews and hindus; ew...he's gay 'cuz she a lesbian who pretends to be a virgin; well...Source(s): project blue beam will show five figures (christian god, buddhist god, hindu god, muslim god, and jewish god) merging in2 1 (de antichrist); so, hide now (within a 7-15 people group; 10-12 according to saint seraphim of sarov; 10-15 according to saint gabriel urgebadze)... no documents as they r from satin (burn 'em); no electronics so that u won't be tracked (even old broken unplugged 1970 tv set will show de antichristo using tesla's ether); forgive me 4 dis spiel.
- 2 months ago
This makes very little sense without like ten readings, no offense. It was, indeed, intense. You did a good job with that. Don't kill her. There are plenty of fish in the sea.
- 2 months ago
This is good ****
- red2queenLv 53 months ago
Learn to breathe in love and compassion, then exhale your anger into air and watch it float away...
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- ObserverLv 73 months ago
I don't appreciate hate speech being passed off as poetry.
- Josh AlfredLv 53 months ago
I don't like it. It's heartless.
- TinaLv 73 months ago
I really doesn't make much sense. In what way is it a poem?
- Anonymous3 months ago
I had to read it twice to understand.
My thought's interfered with your reality first and I misunderstood the real message.
And it's still confusing.....