How do I make my style of writing look more sophisticated ✍️ ?

My style of writing is simple and to the point, but it seems my professors are not impressed by it. I’m not looking for a google like advice, I need more of a it really worked :0 advice. Try to make this description I have provided more sophisticated so that I trust your advice. Thank you :) 

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