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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 2 months ago

I've created a poem in my English studies, but I need help creating a gripping metaphor that suggests that I am imperfect like everyone else?

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  • 4 days ago

    And like a three legged dog, I am flawed but I still make my way in the world. 

    I wear my scars and imperfections like a dlllar store tennis bracelet. 

     

  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    A great American wordsman once penned,

    She aches like a woman,

    But she breaks just like a little girl.

    Source(s): Bob Dylan Just Like a Woman
  • 2 months ago

    Broken mirrors bring seven years of bad luck to every reflection. That's kind of angsty, which many teachers fight.   Maybe... Many streams run into the same ocean to glitter under the sun.  Or... All castles are but sand to the ocean.  

  • OTTO
    Lv 6
    2 months ago

    I am an uncut gem. My imperfections will be exposed by the gemcutter's blow.

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  • 2 months ago

    The future is a lily in your hands.

    You must keep a firm grip on it,

    Lest your dreams crush it and let it die.

  • Anonymous
    2 months ago

    I am the same,no better.

  • 2 months ago

    "Creativity to me is like a flitting bird,

    Which renders my perfection

    More like a lopsided turd."

    Hope this is helpful.

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